Renga is a 15th century Japanese collaborative poetry form. The kick-off poet writes a hokku (three lines, 5-7-5 syllables each, what we now call a haiku), the next poet adds two 7 syllable lines. The third poet takes the 2 lines and adds a 5/7/5 set of verses. And so on...see this example taken from Miner's book Japanese Linked Poetry.
Renga can be serious or funny (haikai no renga), but the game is not so much as to follow a single through line in the imagery, but to link and shift. I enjoy the ways in which the shifts can make me blink, and tsukeai, unusual and evocative juxtapositions of words.
without my glassesIf I'd been in the game, I might have responded with
i’m groping trying to find
where my glasses are
where my glasses areAnyone is welcome to play!
smudged by thoughts I cannot catch
I see drops of grace
I see drops of grace
ReplyDeletefrom the sky they fall gently
to fill empty souls.
Oh, Cathy, this is gorgeous!
DeleteTo fill empty souls
ReplyDeleteGod breaths, and dry bones arise -
dancing with new life.
Sorry - that should read "breathes"
DeleteHere's hoping that God is breathing a bit of spring here!
DeleteDancing with new life
ReplyDeleteCrape myrtles bloom along my way
Making days brighter.
That made my day brighter, Doris!
DeleteDancing with new life
ReplyDeleteCrape myrtles bloom along my way
Making days brighter.
Leaves once fed to moths for silk
Now flutter as Beloved's breath.